Dear Tia,
I'd like to dedicate the following lines to you. This is the first time I gathered a few lines which I can refer to as a poem...Tia....The Orange sky…
Sitting on the edge of the cliff I watched,
As the sun bade goodbye to the day,
Drowning in the horizon it smiled,
At the dusk drenched in it’s every single ray.
I sat there under the shadow of the orange sky...
The evening reminded me of the bygone day,
Would there be a better way to bid adieu
Than gifting a sky that is orange and gay?
And telling that soon I would be seeing you.
I thought…as I sat there under the shadow of the orange sky...
With sweet dismay the wind swayed my hair,
Assured me she’ll be back the next day,
To shower back all the love and care,
I wanted to say good bye but hey!
I still sat there under the shadow of the orange sky!
***
hope you liked it...
take care!
I'd like to dedicate the following lines to you. This is the first time I gathered a few lines which I can refer to as a poem...Tia....The Orange sky…
Sitting on the edge of the cliff I watched,
As the sun bade goodbye to the day,
Drowning in the horizon it smiled,
At the dusk drenched in it’s every single ray.
I sat there under the shadow of the orange sky...
The evening reminded me of the bygone day,
Would there be a better way to bid adieu
Than gifting a sky that is orange and gay?
And telling that soon I would be seeing you.
I thought…as I sat there under the shadow of the orange sky...
With sweet dismay the wind swayed my hair,
Assured me she’ll be back the next day,
To shower back all the love and care,
I wanted to say good bye but hey!
I still sat there under the shadow of the orange sky!
***
hope you liked it...
take care!
2 comments:
that was cute in fact...
such simple but nice rhymes :)
simplicity always touches...
keep writing
very nice!
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